Comments on: Found (Dancing Eternal) http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/ Life, only more so Fri, 11 Dec 2009 08:11:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=1.5.1-alpha by: Law Girl http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-20 Thu, 12 Mar 2009 22:34:28 +0000 http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-20 Beautiful. Beautiful.

]]> by: lime http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-18 Mon, 09 Mar 2009 20:50:06 +0000 http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-18 the 5th stanza is the one that speaks to me. it even stands on it's own with such strength. the 5th stanza is the one that speaks to me. it even stands on it’s own with such strength.

]]> by: cindy http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-17 Mon, 09 Mar 2009 10:53:47 +0000 http://strippedbare.blogsome.com/2009/03/09/109/#comment-17 When did you write this? Were all the stanzas already previously written when you'd first posted the 5th one? I love the optimistic tone, the imagery of fluid (and vaporous) perpetuality. Plus, you just might be right. Question: Why is the word "crying" so oft occurring? Are you thinking of the cry of birds, the cry of women, the cry of the pained, or maybe the cry of a battle cat similar to that projected by my Dodo when mosquito-hunting? When did you write this? Were all the stanzas already previously written when you’d first posted the 5th one?

I love the optimistic tone, the imagery of fluid (and vaporous) perpetuality. Plus, you just might be right.

Question: Why is the word “crying” so oft occurring? Are you thinking of the cry of birds, the cry of women, the cry of the pained, or maybe the cry of a battle cat similar to that projected by my Dodo when mosquito-hunting?

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